2011 WriteMark |
Saturday 12 November 2011 |
New Zealand Plain English Awards |
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People's Choice 'Brainstrain' Document 2011
Judges' comments
See the 'Brainstrain' category requirements for more details.
Winner: Capital & Coast DHB — letter
The two pages are a terrible muddle and very confusing, especially for anyone whose vision may not be good. (More comments sent privately.)
Finalist: AMI — AMI Disclosure Statement
This is meant to be a disclosure statement, i.e., it is meant to disclose something. But it is not immediately clear what it’s trying to disclose.
Finalist: Smartshares — Notice to Unitholders of Smartshares Exchange Traded Funds
The person entering the document for the competition has summed up the danger of this kind of document: "The author may consider that the reader has been informed of something."
2011 Awards winners and finalists
2011 Awards
