People's Choice 'Brainstrain' Document 2011
Judges' comments
Winner: Capital & Coast DHB — letter
The two pages are a terrible muddle and very confusing, especially for anyone whose vision may not be good. (More comments sent privately.)
Finalist: AMI — AMI Disclosure Statement
This is meant to be a disclosure statement, ie, it is meant to disclose something. But it is not immediately clear what it’s trying to disclose.
Finalist: Smartshares — Notice to Unitholders of Smartshares Exchange Traded Funds
The person entering the document for the competition has summed up the danger of this kind of document: "The author may consider that the reader has been informed of something".